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Alice Upside Down [Unfinished]

This was meant to be part two of Alice's Wonderland but I didn't like the way the plot flowed and it was never finished.

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Alice in Wonderland erotica. Whilst I was happy with part One I didn’t like the way Part Two was going and this version fell by the wayside.

 

Alice went off the beaten track and found herself in the woods. She had a strange feeling like someone was following her, perhaps even stalking her. She started to walk deeper into the woods, moving faster and faster but the sense of feeling like prey persisted. A walk became a jog and a jog became a run. She kept looking over her shoulder expecting to see someone right behind her, Mr. Burrows perhaps but there was no one to be seen. Finally she decided to confront her peruser and turned around to confront them.

 

Alice couldn’t see anyone and began to giggle at herself for being so paranoid. “What are you laughing at?” The statement made her jump with a gasp as she noticed a creature with white fur perfectly camouflaged in the trees. “A Rabbit! Oh I knew someone was following me.”

“I think you’ll find you were following me young lady and what do you mean by rabbit?”

“You’re a talking rabbit like the white one I followed down the rabbit hole when I was a girl.”

“I’m not a rabbit I’m a hare!” Said the hare rather offended.

 

The hare began to hop deeper into the forest. “ Wait!” She began to follow the hare. “Oh what a tangle you’ve got yourself into. Look at the state of your dress, what a naughty girl.” Alice tried to continue following the hare but was unable to move any further forward as if she had hit a barrier. Alice felt as if a piece of string had been tied around her chest and as she looked around she realised that she was caught in a giant spider’s web.

 

“Tell me young lady why were you following me.”

“You were following me!” She protested. “Lies lies such a web of lies. Why were you following me young lady?”

“I wasn’t!” She said with a wiggle, desperately trying to get loose. “Enough, interrogate her” Along came a spider who carefully removed her clothes with a pair of scissors. She could feel the cold air touch her skin as her dress dropped to the floor.

 

The spider stood up on her hind legs, resting the next two on her hips she leant forward and began to whisper in her ear. “Come along now, tell me why were you following Mr. Hare?” Her voice was soothing and she felt the hairs on the back of her neck stand up. She scratched all four of her upper legs down the small of Alice’s back. “Just relax and let the words flow from you.”

 

The spider’s voice had a soothing affect on her and she soon felt her entire body relax as she leant forward on the spider web, the tendrils gently taking the weight off her body as she were laying in a giant vertical hammock. “Don’t fall asleep just yet my dear, you need to tell me why you were following the hare.”

“I wasn’t!”

 

“Then what are you doing here? Down under?” Said the spider as she whipped her firm supple buttocks with the foremost joint of her front leg. He gave a sinister grin as she saw her peachy bum ripple hypnotically for a brief moment. It was as hard as a cane and she felt sharp stinging line of pain across her bottom as it struck. The sensation was not at all too unpleasant.

 

She struck her again, harder this time leaving a warm burning sensation where it struck which lingered even after the stinging pain and she could feel herself relax between the legs as she caught her breath from the shock. “Spit it out then, what were you doing here down under in the bush?” As he struck again Alice could feel her quim, already moist from her little adventure in the study become incredibly moist and somewhat slippery and she could feel a buzzing sensation throughout her body that made her feel rather squirmy.

 

“Well I was in my study and I...I guess I was bored, bored and curious I suppose, I felt like going on an adventure or exploring so I went for a walk across the meadow like I did when I was a girl. I’ve never been to this part of the woods so I...” The spider struck her again making her groan with pleasure, she could feel her juices overflow from between her legs and onto her vulva, any wetter and she would certainly start to drip.

 

“The truth is starting to flow now. So you were following Mr. Hare because you wanted some excitement and you like the frill of being chased.” He struck her again and she bit her lip and closed her eyes savouring the moment as the buzz rushed through her body, desperately trying to contain herself, holding in the urge to scream as she felt a little nectar drip from her honey pot.

 

“But if I like the frill of the chase why was I following Mr. Hare?”

“So that you could get him to stalk you like prey of course.” Regardless of her intentions Alice must admit that the outcome is far more exciting than studying algebra. “Yes I suppose I did want something exciting to happen.” The spider massages her back with four legs making Alice sigh as she whispers a secret into Alice’s ear...

 

Alice is pleased at the revelation. “And now you’re here down under exploring a whole new world. Wonderful! Set her free Mr. Hare, set her Free! Let her play down under to her hearts content!” She spanked her again and she felt her head spin with delight and when she opened her eyes and took a shallow gasp as she realised that everything was upside down. “You’re all upside down!” She squealed. “I think you’ll find that you’re the one that is upside down from our perspective here down under.

 

The Hare was sitting on an arm chair wearing nothing but a waist coat sipping the last drop of a glass of whisky as he reluctantly stood up and took a knife from his pocket. Alice felt fatigued and wanted to rest in the web for a while and was a little disappointed as the Hare took the knife and began to cut her from the spider’s web. “Come along my dear, lets get you a hair cut.”

 

He took her through a door and they walked along a high street to a hairdressers. A wonderful peacock was trimming the hair of a beaver using the feathers on her wings like a pair of scissors but as she saw Alice walk through the door she immediately stopped what she was doing and sat Alice down on a chair. “Oh my word this wont do at all.” She placed Alice's legs into cushioned stirrups fitted to the chair and it leant back, spreading her legs, rising up until her feet were above her head and she was laid bare.

 

The hair dresser moved her beak towards Alice’s quim and began to frantically trim her pubic hair until it was neatly cropped. Next she took some soap and began to lather it up into a foam, it felt nice as she gently massaged it into what remained of her pubic hair.

 

Alice awoke in her bed her hand buried deep down under the gusset of her knickers which were soaking wet, she could feel a dampness between her buttocks where her juices had flowed from her sweet quim and there was a damp patch on the sheets where she lay. Her anus felt relaxed as if it could easily accommodate her finger and the index finger of her dry hand felt moist. “Hmm what shall I explore next.” She whispered to herself as she began to gently rub her clitoris

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